. One aspect of technical writingeven more than in other types of writingis learning strategies to make writing more clear, concise, accurate, specific, precise, and usable. Thus, well come back to these exercise more than once this semester. For now, just to get started, look over the exercises on and, then, using the advice offered by the book, revise sentence from Post your revision, putting the original version first so it will be easy for us to see what you changed. While often its best to write your response without looking at what others have already posted, in this instance I ask you to look to see what others have done and to Then discuss what your thinking was in making the changes you did and how they reflect what the book advises. Try to post something early in the week to give everyone a chance to look at and respond to others responses. (10 points: 3 for revising the sentence, using advice from
